Video Game Intro

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  1. Canadians360

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    Well I'm on a team that focuses on information technology research and development. Im working as hard as I can to develop my teams video game by may 8th. Unfortunately I'm at the chopping block constantly due to time constraints. Anyway here is the video for my game as it starts up, Im always glad to hear any feedback.

    P.S. It had to be environmentally themed.

    YouTube- Current State Commercial
     
  2. Youtuber

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    The first part was pretty good, however, that last part was awesome. It felt like I was in the movies watching the Lionsgate, etc. movie introductions.
     
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    Fantastic, love it.
    I did find the second part a bit bland after the first part. That green tree shaped thing seemed very plasticky if that makes sense, which is kinda the opposite of what I'm supposed to think of right?
     
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    I loved it! What is your game about?
     
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    This is one of the better intros I have seen! :)

    I love the last effect, it does look like the effects used in a tutorial that is pretty well known but it is a lot well executed in this.

    Love the first part as well, not sure about the last part of section 1 because it drags on for a few seconds but I definitely love the second part. Logo could do with some work but as for that, really well done.
     
  7. Gr4phix

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    Exactly my thoughts Camofo. I really didn't like the text, it felt so bland and wasn't really fitting in with the thing.

    other than the text, the whole thing was simply amazing! I really loved the feel of it and it was very amazing. The tree was nice, but I think it could be better. I'm not sure how, sorry, but I'm not.

    If it was supposed to be environmental oriented, then how come there was a city? I'm not really following =/
     

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