Well it looks well made and clean for the most part. It looks like it would be fun for slayer. I really like all those double boxes at the ceiling, it reminds me of Jedwali. The thing that doesn't sell the map to me though is the lack of a defining feature. You need to add a "wow" factor in the map that draws attention right off the bat. good work though. it looks like a really good map.
Looks cool and i like all the small deatail you put into it, along with the pallet jumps lol those looks sweet, Go selena