Just wondered which sig would people would like more. The bold colored or the desaturated signature. With this signature I just went for the simple look. I rendered the pictures myself so their not too clean around the edges. CnC. V.1. V.2.
It's 8 pixels too long. Besides, the bigger it is the more likely it is to have more negative space which hurts the signature. Move the text from the left closer to the focal and cut off half the sig. It should help you big time.