SUBJECT:PROJECT IRON CURTAIN SENDER: SHEPERD RECIPIENT: LOST SHEEP CLASSIFICATION: TOP SECRET/EYES ONLY ORIGIN: ONI DEPARTMENT OF [CLASSIFIED], SECTION 3. THE FATE WAS A MAKO CLASS LIGHT DESTROYER ASSIGNED TO PROJECT IRON CURTAIN. IRON CURTAINS OBJECTIVE WAS DO DENY THE COVENANT KNOWLEDGE OR ACCESS TO KNOWLEDGE OF EARTH. THE FATE WAS SENT IN ON A SUICIDE MISSION WITH A HALF CREW TO ELIMINATE A COVENANT CARRIER STRIKE GROUP THAT HAD ALMOST BREACHED THE COLE PROTOCOL BY ATTEMPTING TO ACCESS AN AI RECOVERY UNIT FROM HARVEST LAUNCHED VIA SLIPSPACE GAUSS LAUNCHER. THE FATE SELF DESTRUCED AFTER DESTROYING 2 ASSAULT CARRIERS IN SHIP TO SHIP COMBAT. ONCE IT DETONATED ITS 12 NFWS [NUCLEAR FUSION WARHEAD] 6 COVENANT BATTLE CRUISERS WERE VAPORISED WITHIN 0.9878 SECONDS AFTER DETONATION. THE COLE PROTOCOL WAS ENACTED. STATUS: ALL HANDS LOST. UNSC FATE TOP VIEW GARAGE THE BRIDGE DROPPING IN MAC ROUNDS MAC BLAST COVENANT BASE
You need some pictures of your map or it will be locked. How to post pictures of your map Cool story, though
Thanks for the link for embedding because I had no idea how to embed. took like ten minutes to think of a story line for it.
Love the story, I was a big fan of the book. The only problem with this, is that I've seen way too many of these ships on forge. Props for the effort, but originality is lacking
since halo 3 has been out for years its hard to make it totally original but I try as hard as I can to keep my maps different from others. but its hard to get original with a spaceship because there are only so many things you can build.
hey it's all good man. Just keep forging and adding more detail and perfection to your craftsmanship. You can have a completely random aesthetic statue-no one's gonna know what the hell it is, but if you forged it well and people see that you spent time on it they'll dig it. Keep up the good work. And check out Rifte's Journey's End if you like this forging style. http://www.forgehub.com/forum/aesthetic-maps/94956-journeys-end.html
not a bad effort just one critisism .... the covinant base a banshee a wraith and 2 plasma cannons its just not a base but on a higher note the ship is cool and well forged and the rooms are easily recongised. the story is good and informative good job overall carry on forgeing!
Yeah, I probably should've called it a recon force but that felt too long, but thanks for commenting. I also built a new ship that is better planned and has more rooms. It'll be on my file share once I have a friend find faults in my forging and tell me what to fix. It's called the UNSC Fury. I was gonna name it something epic but all the names were too long. probably gonna put it on ForgeHub so look out for it
I give you props for the effort, but I see that the ship looks kind of cramped. Your ship also is not necessarily lacking in size, but rather how you actually set up the ship up itself. The map also looks completely unbalanced as one team gets a ship with an armory, cover, and a vehicle garage while the other just gets a Wraith, a Banshee, a couple random weapons here and there and some plasma cannons. I understand that this is an aesthetic map, but you could have made the Covenant base a little more "tantalizing". Your story is great though.
I would have added more stuff and made the ship larger but I was not using a budget glitched canvas because I couldn't find a clean one back then... I also didn't make a plan for the design of the ship and didn't attempt to build actual hallways to other rooms because I was not an expert forger back then...