Universal CnC Thread

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by E93, Sep 19, 2008.

  1. SE7ENS1NS4M

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    @The Evil Box

    Compliments: The background is really nice, the colourizing also brings the sig together. The font is good(size,colour,type) which is a problem for most people, so good job!
    It almost looks like they're all looking at your tag and looked pissed at it (which makes me lol). The sig flows really well too-render to sword to tag.

    Criticizime: I noticed that there are some random smudges, such as on the sword, near some of the faces. The faces isn't too bad, though the sword just looks poor like that. Though the colourize(or layer mask?gradient map?) that you used to make the sig all the similar colour makes it come together, it makes it seem kind of bland. Also, theres not border is see, which just helps make the sig feel and look full.

    It's a decent signature: 2.5/5

    Try adding something around it, like a clipping mask or something, it just looks a litte to quiet for my likings. Or maybe try cropping it just to the left of the red guy.
     
  2. The Evil Box

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    Thank you for the review, I will add borders next time.
     
  3. Teerav11

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    can someone give my new sig CnC please. i dont feel like posting it again so just look at my sig
     
  4. Hari

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    I already CNCed you on teh other website so i don't feel a need to do so again. BUT, i am going to post one of my own for cncing.

    Its very unoriginal as this style and render are highly overused but i thought i'd take a crack at it.
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  5. LOCK.xcf

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    It looks good, but nothing special, and the main focal looks a little low. The colors were blended well, and all around it has some flow.


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  6. Zerosun

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    looks good. The text stands out alot IMO. Maybe pic out a light green for the colour? One more thing i think the render is covered too much in smudge. Other than that it looks pretty nice. =)

    heres mine.
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  7. LOCK.xcf

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    First off, i love the text. The colors work well, but the flow seems off. Seems to be a lot of dead space on the left, were the text is. Also, that effect you used to make things look like liquid, isn't working for me. Little big planet is amazing though, so just for that i like it.

    3.5 / 5
     
  8. Warfang

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    The red was intentional, of course.

    I was considering a red border, but I am still not sure. Any suggestions on the size?

    As for the eye's, that was how it was in the render. Apparently he has a lazy eye, or it's just the mask. Either way, not my fault.
     
  9. Teerav11

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    wow nobody ever gets to mine. if anyone decided they want to give me CnC then its in my sig, i dont feel like reposting it
     
  10. SE7ENS1NS4M

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    @LOCKdowN:

    Compliments: This really captures the intenstiy and chaos of war. It reminds me of being shell shocked in a game where everything goes white and you can't hear but keep shooting. Theres a lot going on in the sig near the render, everything flows, eye paths and all that. I'm not sure but is it a flag in the background?
    Anyways, the focal point is really good and eye grabbing.

    Criticism: Honestly, I don't have a lot of criticism for this...it's one of the best i've seen. Maybe just make the flag more evident or whatnot if that's what it is in the background. And the K in LOCK kind of blends to much and looks like and H so it looks like LOCH a bit.

    Again, one of the best sigs i've seen:
    4.5/5!
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    @Teerav11

    Compliments: You got the grimness of the pic across quite well, and there colours go together more less.
    The font type goes pretty well with the sig too.The purple compliments the red, and the black lines give it a spooky look.

    Criticism: Well while we're on fonts, i don't really like the placement of your sig. I'd suggest a little further down, and not on the head. Another thing is that the signature is pretty plain other than the render. The bg clearly has had a lot of work on it, and it looks good, i'd just suggest sizing down render a little, and let a bit more of it show. The right side of the sig looks a little boring, you might try adding a tribal brush or something(i think that'd work nicely with it). The last thing i'd say is that the border is just a smidge big, maybe take it down one pixel.

    It's a pretty decent signature: 3/5

    I'd be happy to see a v2
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    Here's my newest *****...smack her up a little and tell her how to be better:
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  11. The Evil Box

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    I really like the orange background behind him. I don't think the text goes with the tag, and maybe try to blend the render with the background. I can't really see if you have a border but that would make the tag a lot more better.

    3/5

    Here's my new one. Please rate it!

    [​IMG]
     
  12. Knight Kninja

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    i really like the background. it looks sweet, and it does seem to radiate from batman. maybe have it flow outward a little more though. also, try adding a greater light source on the side that the lighting is on. also, you should maybe fade the rays coming from him. unfortunately, i also think that the background doesnt fit the render as well as it could. if the background were a little darker that would probably be better. and idk how but somehow merge the render with the BG a little more. it would be kind of hard but maybe have a couple smudges overlapping him or something.

    thats alot of critisism.. but i have one more. the text.

    try using a simpler text, or making that one smaller. my thoughts on that text is it stands out way too much, try overlaying it on the sig, making it smaller, and putting it in the space to the right of batman's head. i suck at text too but that is just my thought on it.

    i like the sig though. 6.5/10
     
  13. The Evil Box

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    Thanks, I have yet to learn from really good graphics artists, seems as I am just starting out with my graphics. Thanks for the comment though. I will be making another tonight.
     
  14. Knight Kninja

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    alright good luck.. ive been sorta sucking as of late but i still like to help out
     
  15. The Evil Box

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    These things will help me out, thanks for the feed back.
     
  16. SE7ENS1NS4M

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    @The Evil Box:

    Compliments: I like how you added the border like you said you would! The colours are all similar, which is good. The light shining from behing batman really gives him a "heroic" look (which is probably a good thing). The BG is good again, like your last one-it's your strong point.

    Criticism: Though you made a border, it's a tad too big. If you're not sure how to do them, just ask or PM me(theres an easy way lol). The text font doesn't go well with the sig style, I would recomend a simple font, maybe italic even. Also, darken the text, or use the overlay method(PM if you don't know what that is too lol).

    Decent signature: 2.5/5, are you fairly new to graphics?
    No offense intended lol, i was just wondering.
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    Here's my v2, I added a larger border(i did have one before though). I also changed the font, and played with the brightness/contrast. Oh and I blended the render with the rest of it. Tell me what you think!
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  17. The Evil Box

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    I like this v2, I can actually see the text lol. I like the how you played with the brightness and contrast. One small problem is the focal is a tad bit to dark, but other than that it is a good sig. And I like how you made the border a little bit bigger :)
     
  18. Knight Kninja

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    I actually like teh avvy. I couldn't think of a good way to pull that one off. I seriously think that nothing is wrong with it. Good job.

    Here's my newest sig, the one I shall use when I become un-warned tommorow.
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    NOTE: This is supposed to be for the FH X skin.
     
  20. Knight Kninja

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    oh wow lol... good thing you told me about the X skin cause i was about to try to be non offensive and not pull it off too well. anyways, i really like the lines sort of spanning the sig, and the human x ray thing is pretty cool too. my only complaint is the acrophysis background. its a little plain and i think you could have used a better one. i like the size and space it takes up, but the colors, along with the way it looks, doesnt appeal to me.
     

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