Monotony really kills. Depth. I don't see it. Not feeling the fact that there's a duplicate focal (even if not intended) If I were to rate, solid beginner.
I'm actually liking this one, it shows a bit of depth and some flow to it, good job man. Keep working on it, and I know we say "look at tutorials" and beat that dead horse forever, but I still have to suggest it
really nice effects, I love what you did with a simple pose. The twirly lights flowing by his face is cool. Makes the Ultra feel like he is in a whole new world. Like he is emerging or coming into the world. Flowing or cruising in a strafe manner or a slow manner. Great job, i like this one.