Hey guys, I've posted about a dozen or so machinimas on youtube, but only two of theme are even watchable. My other attempts where very crappy, and I didn't really spend a long time working on it. Once reach comes out, I will start a short series pertaining to soething new, that I don't think has ever been done before. Bellow are two of my machinimas: Halo: Free Spartans PART I Battle: Spartan Vs. Elite I'm also working on another Halo 3 machinima which I hope to have up n a week or two before school starts. It is very similar to the Aniken Vs. Obi-wan fight at the end of Star Wars: Episode III. All feedback on these two machinimas would be appreciated
Uhh...I only watched the first one.. I don't even really want to watch the second one.. Plenty of things wrong with these..Not trying to troll, just nothing things 1: Noise. The different recordings from each person is very varied...the "CHCHECHHCCECCECEHHwhatCEHCEhappendCHECEHHCEHHEC" Sounds like major ****. Download Audiacity or some program that removes the noise Another thing, Try not to breath into the microphone. 2: Acting. You and your actors are reading straight from the script. That makes the words sound choppy and makes it sound bad. Memorize the script, and improv. 3: Movements. I could tell you were the only person moving the characters, and you were were bumping into the green guy expecially. Another thing I spotted at the very beginning, the green guy walks completely to the wall, stops, turns around and walks again. If you were walking, you wouldn't walk completely into a wall, then turn around. You need to make the movements more "Realistic" 4: Voice actors. Get more, never have the same person play two people