Download here Bungie.net : Community : Forum Topic Listing : Forum Reply Listing Description: Its the first map I made that I've actually had lots of fun on. There are several sniping spots, two you and teleport two one you respawn on. I'm not going to tell you where the teleports are because that ruins the fun. Theres a soccerball respawn(you respawn in a box I made out of walls with soccerballs, you can tell when people are in it because they start yelling haha) and theres a fusion coil respawn. And pay attention when you start of in the bases because if you aren't playing teams people will be right beside you. Its funny when you assasinate a person right when the game begins Weapons: Just about every one. I know there isn't any needlers, plasma pistols, smgs, spikers, magnums, plasma rifles, gravity hammers, turrets, sentinel beam, and there isn't a flamethrower. Gametypes: Team Slayer/Slayer(what we normally play on it with) I'm sure you could play on it with others but I haven't tryed it. Now for the pictures. Sniper spot1 Sniper spot2 Base1 Base2 View of the right side Room1 Room2 Please no flaming. Its one of my first maps. Give me some tips. P.S. I'm going to try to get a good overview of the map shortly
needs interlocking and bases just seem like a bunch of stuff put on the map in no order but i like the sniper area
It is very hard to say this without flaming but this is not one of the top tier maps..... sorry to tell you this but I will help. First it is not neat try to straiten things up. Second there is way to much open space. Third and most important for posting anything on forgehub INTERLOCK it keeps things neatly combined. Good post too. Keep forging and I hope too see some more of your creations.
No more 'too sloppy' messages. If your not going to download it, dont say anything. I highly recommend looking at the Forging 101s. Partiuclarly, interlocking and spawning. Also take a look at some of the Featured maps for examples of what we look for at Forge Hub.
Umm... definately try harder on the map, then post. If you have some friends, get them to test it out, and make changes. Agree with above posts... Oh, and I think... Welcome to Forgehub! Right? Is that what I say? Oh and sorry! Didn't see the post two posts above me! Sorry I commented!
To Disturbed Pillow: welcome to forgehub! This is a good example of a beginner forger To the other hubbers (except for the one above me): He knows that its sloppy, so stop saying it! How 'bout u teach him to forge!
Thanks for the constructive critisizm guys. Even though yall all say the same thing haha. I know theres a lot of open space, I like playing in open spaces, thats why its like that but I might change it. I know how to interlock but like I said this was one of my first maps and I didn't know how to then. Now I do. And thanks JuiceBox. Your name seems really familiar....
Nice map dude. Although its not up to most peoples expectations, just think, at least you tried. My first map was way worse. Just a bunch of crap. and the oh so cliche infinite fusion coils haha. So anyways take the advice thats been given to you and the forging 101 section to get way better. Hope to see future maps soon -Toast
Haha ya I noticed its not up to most(all) peoples expectations. I have other maps....but now I'm scared to post them lol.
eh. dont worry. If you dont want to post em then you dont have to. Or you could just tweak them up with the tips and guides, then post them!
Ya I might. I need to try my maps out with some people. I tryed Tons O Weapons out and we all had fun. I must not be like most people....I don't need a maps walls to be straight to have fun, but I guess thats not me(I'm not trying to be a smart*insert word here*)
Sloppier than a Sloppy Joe. Or an overstuffed taco. Uh, keep trying, forging can take alot of practice. You see, things like this lose their charm after a few rounds - I mean, sure, lasering people and having whatever you want right there for you is great, but, honestly, anyone could make a better map than this if they try.
Ok people. I know its sloppy. Will you point out exactly what your talking about. I fixed some of the walls on the right side of the map(by the double boxes and stuff) that looked like crap, I made the soccerball respawn look a little better and made the windowpane things look a little nicer. But what exactly do yall mean.