Timeshift

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  1. Gr4phix

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    Tell me what you think, it's not as great as my sig I have now but I think it's O.K.

    I didn't add text because I really suck at text ha ha.
     
  2. ZANDER1994

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    Lighting on the figure needs to be redone. It's WAY too bright for what's in the background. I mean, the background is meant to look foggy or hazy, then you look at his visor and it's like looking into a sun or something.
     
  3. Gr4phix

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    Will do. *Edits*

    Edit : Actually, I have the game his visor is always Bright Yellow.

    Edit 2 : How about this? Lightened up the background.

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    Plus, the lighting of the sparks needs to fade out on the edges. Light spreads, and fades. It never stays condensed.
     
  5. RaBBiiTTT

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    Get rid of the effect on the right. Place the render a little bit more to the left. Needs more blending as well. Try a gradient map or a photo filter.
     
  6. R0FLninja

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    yeah dude, get rid of all that green crap around his head.

    did u use a render?
    cuz if u didnt, i really want to see the stock
     
  7. Gr4phix

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    @Ninja I always use Renders, I suck with stocks. I can give you the render though.

    @RaBBiTTT The effect near his head on the right correct? Yeah I was trying to get a different effect and couldn't get it right and it kind of messed up there. The effect I was originally going for was much better but made the rest of the sig look shitty (Even worse than it is now I should say.) I'll try a Grad. Map or Photo Filter and see how it comes out. If I don't like the result I'll try a new sig with the Render because I really do like the Focal Point.
     
  8. Lord Terrax XII

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    He's talking about the green **** that is just there. Also on the "Sparks" (The green **** and other effects around it) make it fade at the ends by using a soft brush eraser.

    Although the green is the worst all of the effects behind the dude kinda look terrible. The smudging is good (Although I'm not a fan) and the colors are good but still... Effects are terrible.

    Good early (Hopefully) attempt though.
     
  9. Gr4phix

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    Ok I see the green now, wow I'm a freaking retard! I wasn't a fan of the sparks either, I had a better effect that turned into crap. =(

    I'm starting to get back into Photoshop so I guess it's an early attempt.
     

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