Found a nice stock and had a nice idea. I dont think i stressed it we'll enough but i wanted to try something new
The grenade is a little choppy on the edges, also my eyes are only looking at the grenade. It's as if the spartan could not be there and it would look the same.
I have to agree, my eyes are drawn more to the 'nade than anything else. Also, being that I use FH Light X, I couldn't see the "Thrown Into" part of the text until I highlighted the tag. EDIT: I also just noticed there are dark fuzzy lines where the transparent area is. They're scattered around that area, and are hard to see unless you're looking for them.
im in FH light as well, and i just thought the text was "Color" anyways, i would crop the left a little and blur the spartan some more
Nice concept, but it needs a bit of touching up and polish. If you ask me, I would use the Fuzzy Select tool (if you're using Gimp) and click on the Transparent part to see where those dark fuzzy lines are.