Time for harsh reality, i'm afraid. - The start nearly gave me a seizure. TOTALLY over top top there. - The slowed down bits look unprofessional as they are below a decent frame rate (not your fault, but you should avoid using it altogether) Also, its better to slow into clips, and then instantly speed up, not continue it - The music you used was not right for trying to sync directly to with the speeding up and slowing down. - Some of the transitions were pretty neat, but again were fairly choppy at times - The video in general seems pretty unpolished and untimed with no real structure or idea - The quality was generally fairly poor, and the cropped off sections of the screen taht were constantly changing got really on my nerves. It's a good effort for a first montage, but even by starting standards the polishing and the ideas just arn't present, and the overall product looks rather dull and unexciting. Just watching through that I skipped loads of bits and ended up with the same style of clip. It's a montage. Mix things around a bit. Give people some spacial awareness and other angles.