The Pit 2

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by ZeroChaos69, Dec 31, 2007.

  1. ZeroChaos69

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    Okay so this is my first map I made entirely by myself >.<

    I call it the pit 2 cause when i was sleeping i dreamt it up (yea weird..) and it had the same textures as the pit. so anyways, it's a slayer based map and it looks pretty fun (i don't have enough people to try it out >.<) so if some people wanna send me friend requests maybe we can try it out.

    also i know it needs a lot of editing so thats why i'm hoping some people on here can help out with that. some walls are slanted and stuff and i couldn't get everything to fit right, but all in all i think it's pretty good. also the weapons are just kinda poorly placed so if someone could help with that too that would be great.
    and so before i forget heres the link to the map

    The Pit 2 (on Foundry)


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    The Big Picture

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    Sniper Spawn (bottom of map)

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    Rocket Spawn (top of map)
     
  2. Lone Deity

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    Hey! Welcome to ForgeHub!

    Here are some tips to getting more downloads.

    1. Embed Pictures
    1a. To do this, host them on imageshack, or photobucket
    2. Make appealing links. For Ex: [.url=http://google.com]THE BEST SEARCH!!![./url] Without the periods= THE BEST SEARCH!!!
    3. Make your post appealing with colors and descriptions!

    P.S. NO LINKS TO FILE SHARE. It's a general rule.
     
  3. ZeroChaos69

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    thanks, i fixed my post. sorry for the link to file share. i'm new >.<
     
  4. Lone Deity

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    Some tips about your map:

    Some of it looks sideways. Make sure to align your objects as perfect as possible.

    The Rocket spawn is on a weapon holder. Minimize this.

    The title is a bit misleading ;)
     
  5. ZeroChaos69

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    about the sidewaysness i said in my first post (and if i didn't i meant to lol) that i suck at making maps but i tried my best to get them straight but thats why i need help with touching it up (which is why i'm here lol)

    also things didn't align right and made for some akward peices being placed and holes on the top floors (but i like the holes cause they lead to the sniper spawn so if you want to help touch up the map please try and leave those alone)

    as for the rock launcher in the weapon holder, i did that cause i wanted to emphasize the rocket launcher as being a good weapon on the map (at least i think so..)

    and as for the name i said in my original post that in my dream where i first saw this map (when i said i dreamt it up i actually meant i had a dream and this was the map i was on >.<) and the walls and such look like those on the pit.
     
  6. XxTexasHornxX

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    Zero, if you want to maximize your downloads, you should use proper grammar in your description. Yes, this is the internet but at Forge Hub we strive to make our maps as clean as possible and our presentation of our map that way too. The way we look at it, you spend so much time making the map that you can put 5 minutes into your description to make it more appealing. Also, if you write a sloppy post then that makes us think your map is sloppy too (which you have said it is right now, but for future reference). Welcome
     
  7. SargeantSarcasm

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    the pics of your map show how badly aligned your map is, make everything straight
     
  8. Lone Deity

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    C'mon guys! Give him a break. He's new.

    And really, align your scenery.
     
  9. ZeroChaos69

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    I'm sorry >.<
    I have trouble with forge, every time i try to align something i move some other dimension out of place. How do you guys do it?
     
  10. Lance001

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    Welcome to ForgeHub, bro. Your map looks like a lot of fun. Just touch up the slants (except in places that are done on purpose. Make those professional looking, though), test it with peeps from this board, and continually edit it to perfection. Welcome aboard!
     

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