The pelican

Not very good, no interlocking, very tacky forging... try to make it better, it seems you don't take into account gameplay and the smoothness, even if this was meant for nothing but aesthetics, it is still not good
Try to make it smoother at least!

 

pelican looks terrible. try interlocking a ton more. also, expand the covenant base and add maybe another pelican.
and WTF are the "rogue" mongeese doing flipped over way to the side? makes no sense

 

I agree with orandE its not to good, the ground looks very bumpy and the forging all together looks like improvement is needed. But on a positive note I like that its on Avalanche.

 

Since I can see that no-one else has given you these links I thought I should-

Interlocking- Here
Geo-Merging (For floor)- Here

 

it spretty cool but i think its a little too messy you know
well maybe its also that its no tmy stlye, i could be that
but Bsides that is Cool>>>

 

The only thing I like so far is the Warthog Switch. It would be a whole lot better if you didn't have to throw a grenade to activate it though.

 

Ok this is somewhat well put together. The Pelican itself is a good outside, but no interlocking. The covenant base is just... need i say more. A v2 with interlocking maybe geomerging and make the bases more smooth and think about gameplay even if its an aesthetic map. For now 3/5

 

the pelican doesn't look so good, so-so forging, no interlocking. it looks like a lazy map. you definitely need a version 2.0.

 

the only people that would fly in that pelican are lego people because it looks like crap!

 

Awesome job, dude! This is the first pelican I have seen on Avalanche, and it's a pretty good one, too! Lot's of people say it's ugly, but it's cool on the inside. But you should make it look better from the outside. If you want help, send me a friend request, HLG Amber CIad.

 

Yes,like everyone has said,try interlocking,if you are not quite sure how,then i wold be happy to teach you how. And next time try making the pelican a little bigger

 

i would have to agree with most of the people. the forging is not that good. and the map isnt all that outstanding. try interlocking.

 

Too messy needs to be cleaner by interlocking more, that way it looks smooth and makes the map look a ton better. If you have troubles with interlocking hows about you look in the forums and select forging 101 then hopefully you can find a thread about it and learn easily on how it's done.

 

By looking at the pics, it has some sloppyness. Interior and most everything else is x2 bigger than the real thing. The cockpit is effortless.

Sorry, you need to work harder on it. Foundry has better materials meant for a Pelican.

 

Yeah, not to bash or anything, but you need to interlock when your making things like this. Definetely. Your screenshots hardly focused on the focus of the map so that was a little ddisspointing. I suggest looking at some other asthetic maps, get a feel.

 

next time go here Forging 101 - Forge Hub Halo Forums when your making a map cuz that looks like poo.

 

Yeah this map is not the best. Remember, forging should take you at least six hours originally, then about one hour testing and two hours revising. I got this same advice when I posted my first map. Do NOT get discouraged. You WILL get better. You must learn the standards of excellence that is expected here at ForgeHub. Just re-do this map, make it clean, and you will be on your way to be a good forger. If you need help forging, PM me and I will help you. Also, amny other great forgers are willing to help you out. I've utilized them and so should you.

 

sorry, man. it doesn't look like a pelican at all. if you need someone how to teach you some forging tricks either FR me: stickmanmeyhem or clicky: my clan will teach u some stuff