I present to you Foundary's first race true race track. Test your wits and skill in this complex and original racetrack. Featuring the tower, the soccer alley and the shield jump. ADVANCED DRIVERS ONLY- may not get on first try.... http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=15411895 One thing I would like to point out is the discovery of shield jumps. Play the map and you will see. Over View Will he make the jump?
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL Wow, cool idea, beautiful track, exciting layout...my only concern would be what people do when they miss a jump. There doesn't look like there's a lot of direction from there. Perhaps consider placing some sort of arrow-system or something, just to help people out? Regardless, it looks gorgeous!
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL What, may I ask, is a 'sheild jump?' Other than that it looks like a fun track.
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL It's AJ ranking time! Description- 5 out of 10 Pictures- 7 out of 10 Links- 5 out of 10 Overall- 7 out of 10 This looks like an awesome map, but you have forgotten some key things in your thread. Your description is ok, I mean it could be much better, but it could be much worse. The link is ok, it could be shortened, but most people don't do it even though they should. Fix this stuff and your overall would become a 8 out of 10. I have spoken!
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL As you bounce off of shield doors (i.e., Snowbound), I'm assuming that your mongoose must bounce when it comes into contact with the shield, since vehicles cannot go through them.
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL I am an idiot I forgot to link the map... http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=15411895
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL Link fixed, AJ. Care to upgrade the rating?
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL Looks fun, but if you miss on of the tight corners
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL Lance thnx for the comments.
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL My rating has been updated
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL Thanks, AJ. Killer, what he means by shortening the link is taking the url and putting it like a dis: [.url=http://blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblah.com] Your Link![./url] Take out the periods, and you have a ridiculously long link that is suddenly two short, pretty words. It makes your topic so much more professional looking, too!
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL You don't know how I rank things, it is hard and 7 out of 10 is good. See you have an average description. 5 is average, it is considered ok in my book. I think I'm going to come up with a new new new way to rate maps.
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL Sorry for the double post Use the code button (looks like this #) it disables any code so people can see it. "Now you know!"
Re: Killer678 and axis24 presents THE CYCLONE -Taking tracks to the next LVL Dang. You're a good man for showing me that. I know nothing. =D And I believe AJ is saying that your description, while it names three things on your map, is lacking. A good paragraph of what the map plays like, feels like, and looks like would be great! Keep it up! Code: [url=OMGCODE!]WOWZORS![/url]
So you just hold it up in the sky where you want it and then save and quit? Thanks for the info there! :squirrel_rocking: