YouTube- The Bomb When a man is teleported to investigate a dangerous area, he finds something he will never forget.
I would tell you what was good and what needs work regarding this if you hadn't ruined the entire thing through that bullshit troll ending.
If I were to describe the ending in one word it'd be "no". Seriously though, that sound effect is over used, irritating and IMO not funny whatsoever. I can see what you were trying to achieve by building it up to be a serious machinima with the protagonist walking through the desert, only to then surprise the audience (by doing so amusing them) with an unexpected ending, but personally I don't think it worked. The build up to it was good though, however I felt that the camera-shaking effect could have been a bit jerkier and shaking more violently, and at parts it was a bit hard to see due to the effects you used (I believe you were going for the "sandstorm effect" where you can't see anything in front of you, but there's only so much nothing you can watch without getting bored). Overall, I probably would have liked it had the ending not ruined it.