yeah.. i blurred most of the tank and probably forgot about that section. is it better now? I tried to fix it.
This is a pretty cool sig. The render is really good, and it fits well with the background. I am not a huge fan of the font, though, because its really hard to read. I think the color is better on the first one; the second one is just not as good looking, but I'm not sure why... Overall, nice work.
The text, I can't read it...the bg and the tank blend well tho, but put the render and bg together is really all you did....Not to sound harsh...