Swagger

Meh, the effects (c4d?) are alright but everything seem seperated from each other. The effects, render and background seem disconnected. The text is pretty good though

 

Looks good but the c4d on the back should be coming off of him instead of just randomly sitting there.

 

The render and background seem like they don't connect in someway. I dont know if this is a stock or not, but the render or character is way too small. There is too much empty space to the left because of this. Also try getting the c4d to work with the flow and the render rather then having it sit there. Nice job though.

 

i like it, nice flow and everything, but the pink line between swager and donii ruins it IMO.

 

I likes it.

Just fix that c4d in the top right. It disrupts the flow.

 

The flow is pretty good, but that pink line bugs the hell out of me! Other than the line it looks relatively good.