Still Life Drawing

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Monolith, Nov 5, 2012.

  1. Monolith

    Monolith Ancient
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    So this is my first time posting a drawing here. It took about two hours... Yeah, I'm not a very fast drawer:

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    So yeah.. thoughts?

    And yes, I know the rim on the cup and the scissors handle look bad.. this was homework, not something I tried too hard on..

    Edit: I think it would've looked better with the background shaded slightly.. since the water carton looks really light
     
  2. Audienceofone

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    Its tough to critisize this without a image of the actual thing from the same angle.

    though my suggestions would be to shade the background accordingly, the jug looks dark and I think it's supposed to be water, which is not dark. Other than that, the objects don't interact or overlap. Pretty boring without that. Otherwise a good drawing, just work on composition.
     

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