Stealth Ship

Discussion in 'Reach Aesthetic Maps' started by Devil trigger, Apr 18, 2011.

  1. Devil trigger

    Devil trigger Forerunner

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    I originally started this map to see if i could create an exterior shell of a ship in less than thirty minutes, sadly to say it took around forty five. After finishing the shell of this ship i was compelled to finish it. All in all the whole map to about an hour and forty five minutes to complete. I had no real plan for the ship in my head so i just went by instinct.


    Front View
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    Side View
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    Rear View
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    Cockpit
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    Living Quarters
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    Sleeping area
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    Looking from outside
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    Constructive comments very much welcome
     
  2. Madpond

    Madpond Forerunner

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    NICE MAP AND ALL BUT COULD YOU I DONT KNOW RAISE IT OFF THE GROUND
    and make a control tower or something
    i like the anesthics and the other hand
    nice ship
     
  3. hollow123

    hollow123 Forerunner

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    Great ship, but I agree as stated above it seems like it needs something more! :D
     
  4. jura293

    jura293 Forerunner

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    Very nice but the cockpit could use something better than shield barriers. Also VERY nice outer aesthetics.
     
  5. Flyingman66

    Flyingman66 Forerunner

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    put a window double/small window at the front

    the front of the ship looks scruffy with all those deployable cover things, make a window double and phase it into the gap, if it doesn't fit, place a few blocks around it, otherwise great start to a ship map, i like how you did the wings at the rear but the front needs some extra detail, it's nice to see someone make a decent bed for a change, if but a small one. looks very snug.
     
  6. japanduh

    japanduh Forerunner

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    looks pretty sick the only thing is that the front window thing is a little funky and also move the colesium walls out more so they arent black or even take them out completely other than that it's really nice
     

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