The second is supposed to make it look more like stained glass. I also thought about entering this in the SOTW. But no, because everyone is prejudice againts anime signatures.
i like the kinda "Simplicity" One suggestion tho, to make it really look like stained glass, break the girl up, so its kinda fractical. And maybe have a dim solid color for each square and it would look better. Btw, i love the BG. It fits perfectly, Good job IMO.
I actually quite like the simplicity of this sig. A question though, did you mean for her head to be sticking out of the glass? That is what it looks like right now.
Looks nothing like stained glass. Change the colours on each piece and don't make the shapes so..absurd. I've never seen stained glass in that matter.