Foundry Sports Studio

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Aesthetic Maps' started by JMJ405, Jun 29, 2009.

  1. JMJ405

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    Sports Studio
    Duh-nuh-nuh, nuh-nuh-nuh.​

    PLEASE NOTE: This map was made by request for Lord Perseis to be used as a machinima set. This map is not to be used by any persons for a machinima without the permission of Lord Perseis and myself.​

    There's really not much to explain, so I'll just jump into some screenshots.

    The T.V.
    [​IMG][/URL]​

    Commentators desks and chairs.
    [​IMG][/URL]
    (The weapon holders serve as microphones and weights to keep the barriers in place.)​

    Ha, I had to add something sports related to keep it from looking like a news room.
    [​IMG][/URL]​

    And in other news.....
    [​IMG][/URL]​

    .....Plaxico Buress shot himself in the leg.....again.
    [​IMG][/URL]​

    ***UPDATE***
    3 Turrets have been added to act as "cameras."

    [​IMG][/URL]

    Download Here.

    The End.​
     
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  2. iTz Fuzzywig

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    Soooo why post i if you don't want anybody to use it without permission...it kinda defeats the purpose..... Yhe map looks ok but the interlocking is kinda sloppy and it looks very empty so perhaps you should add some more stuff to it - or is it susposed to look like that?
     
  3. mastersync23

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    Not really...He just wants you to contact him if the map is used in a Machinima.

    Anyways, I don't mind the look of it, though, as Fuzzy said, it is pretty empty, even for an aesthetic map. You could have made a camera out of random crap.

    So all up, this map gets a 3/5. Not the worst, but certainly not the best. Try adding just a bit more stuff to give it an added realism factor.
     
  4. JMJ405

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    yeah i was gonna place some turrets as cameras but i wasnt sure if Perseis wanted that. I just wanted to meet his specifications.

    EDIT: the walls probably look crooked because some are making angles......idk how to explain, im retarded, if you look at it in person you'll know what im talking about.
     
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  5. MXG Frost

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    I would suggest straightening your interlocking because some walls are slanted, and the room is pretty bland. It would've be great if you used teleporters to write out the initials of the broadcasting station (ex. ESPN), or maybe a basketball hoop.
    I understand this is for a machinima set, so ill give it a 4/5.
     
  6. mastersync23

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    Yes, but maybe you could place a pallet table, or a drum camera, or something really original. Just a suggestion.
     
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  7. OhNoez64

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    1 word. Fuzzywig. He's the master of Aesthetics, get him to help you out next time.

    Next, if you've seen Digitalph33r's Holiday special, there's a guy holding a rocket to look like a camera, and because he can lower his weapon, it's looks are like a good camera.

    But remember fuzzywig.
     
  8. RebelCow

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    it looks preety cool i guess. but too basic for me. the interlocking is very good and i like the camera idea. 3.5/5
     
  9. blackandblutoo

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    Ya fuzzywig is awsome. He can sure forge!
    As for the map it is a bit to empty but really good otherwise.
    Try to make chairs, cameras, and mabye a news/sports set for commentary.
    It looks good though, 8/10
     

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