Hey guys. Although it isn't exactly how I pictured it, I'm pretty happy with it being my first short. It was definitely a learning experience. It is by no means perfect, and didn't convey the message as well as I had hoped but, I hope you enjoyed it anyways. Constructive feedback is very welcome, as it will only make us better. Big thanks to Billy, Karl, and Mike. You guys really made this possible. PLEASE Check out Billy's channel: BillyRawr's Channel - YouTube Please watch in HD. It looks better! SPLIT (2011) : A Short Film - YouTube
Coffee shop part was good. The beginning was pretty hard to understand what was going on. Lighting and camera angles where awkward. For instance I couldn't see the characters face in the first half. Why was he pacing back and forth manacially? What was he writing on the desk? More character interaction would be better too. Perhaps a family member of his giving some background on him via a conversation. The character speaking to a doctor, etc.