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  1. Kidbomber

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  2. Halo Orlando

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    Its difficult to read that text. On first glance it is completely illegible and you really have to look at it closely to determine what it actually says. Therefore, as the piece is based on the text, I feel that it doesn't quite match the intended idea. I would suggest adding more obvious indicators as to the letters than small indents.
     
  3. Gunnergrunt

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    Does it say Justles the Artist?
     
  4. RaVNzCRoFT

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    Bad. Make it much more legible.
     
  5. KratosAurion777

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    Agreed. Also, I am not sure that the 3D text really works with the 2D background... it looks off, because the 3D text should have some sort of 3D background when it is angled like that.
     
  6. J4M NUTST3R

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    i think the text is Fine, but it's just generally a bit boring. It needs to be more interesting, i understand itit's not really supposed to be and incredible artwork by itself, but you want to give the impression that you have gone to some length for it. I'd also agree that it needs more 3Dness.
     
  7. Cosmic Rick

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    I'm a big fan of grotesque (that's what they're called, right?) fonts. The piece looks great. I love the contrast.

    I wouldn't use it for web branding, though, as it is difficult to read... especially since Justles doesn't resonate as a word in people's brains.

    Now that I know what it says, though, I can go back and it looks great.
     
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    Text is hard to read.
     
  9. Kidbomber

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    Appreciate the comments. I know its hard to read. Every font like so people dont really like being it is hard to read. Oh well, still one of favorite kinda fonts to use besides the classics.

    Yeah I get you one that. If it was a more known name then it be easier to read. Happy to im not the only one who likes these kinda fonts ^^. (Ps I do think you're right on the name, however im not to sure myself anymore.)
     
  10. Whisper

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    That's not a grotesque font. It looks like Bifurk, or at least some similar font, and Bifurk is not a grotesque. It's really just an ornamental typeface, if anything.
     

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