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Discussion in 'Reach Competitive Maps' started by xxinsanity, Oct 24, 2010.

  1. xxinsanity

    xxinsanity Forerunner

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    This map was inspired by two Halo classics, Guardian and Lockout. It is smaller than most maps in Reach. It is a Team Slayer based map. Download, played on it, rate and review. Please also feel free to add any suggestions for the map and any map ideas you would like to see come true. So get to downloading and look at these pictures! Created by ChiTownBrownie and HnR xx Insanity

    Screenshots can be found here.
    Bungie.net : Halo Reach : File Details (Sniper Tower)
    Bungie.net : Halo Reach : File Details (Overlook of bottom mid from snipe lift)
    Bungie.net : Halo Reach : File Details (Blue Tower)
    Bungie.net : Halo Reach : File Details (Red Base)
    Bungie.net : Halo Reach : File Details (Overview)

    17 views and no replies!? I need feedback and C&C, I would appreciate it very much even harsh comments.
     
    #1 xxinsanity, Oct 24, 2010
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  2. Celestial Panda

    Celestial Panda Ancient
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    Your best bet for getting people to view, stay, comment and play your map is to have a look at other (popular) map postings and see what they've done.

    People are inherently lazy, and you'd be best having embedded images, not links to the bungie images. May I also recommend stealing a template from either a popular map, or last time I checked there was a sticky with helpful advice.

    From a quick look, I think that it needs more line-of-sight cover, and going from base to base seems lethal.

    On the first image I see a platform, a dip then another platform. Jumping on maps is fairly bad, as you've got to concentrate on jumping AND not dying, which is made harder from (you guessed it) the lack of cover, caused by the lack of up and down-y space.

    I can definitely see the Lockout inspirations though, so good job on that.
     
  3. Tension

    Tension Forerunner

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    Here are the embedded screenshots:

    Overview:
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    Blue Base:
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    Red Base:
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    Side View:
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    Man cannon:
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    Next time embed your pictures please and its pretty good im not sure if its supposed to be a remake or just a combination of both maps. Im not sure were you put the guardian inspiration though because it looks more towards lockout even though they are pretty much the same map. Also, could you put a weapons listing please? Your welcome
     
    #3 Tension, Oct 24, 2010
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  4. xxinsanity

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    Thanks for adding the pictures for me! I am new to these forums so I couldn't quite figuire out how to add pictures. I was thinking that lack of cover would be a problem and so I will add more cover and maybe expand the map a bit.

    From memory the weapons list is:
    Plasma Pistol x1
    DMR x2
    Needle Rifle x2
    Sword x1
    Sniper Rifle x1
    Spiker x1
     

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