Spirit DX class dropship

Looks good. I might change the wraith to a plasma turret.

 

It looks really boring. Just a box here, a box there, and a Wraith for no good reason.
Maybe you could make the wings out of walls and stuff, and replace that Wraith with a plasma turret or two.

You should make it hold a ghost.

 

I'ma side with Nemi on this one. This doesn't look innovative, or even to-scale. Looks like something I could make in about 3 seconds, no offense. Try harder next time.

 

cmon guys give him a break =D i honestly have been wanting to make sumtin like this for a while but never found the time to do it......he has helped me =D i think it needs a little work but over id give it a 9/10 id be happy to help u if u do a v2

 

Ummm.. no. This needs more work for sure. I see all kinds of details in the original pic that are on your creation. Granted you can't include everything, but you definately could have tried harder. Just off the top of my head, you could have angled those outermost boxes to give it more of a rounded feel to the fork-like portion of the ship.

 

yeah it's to simple

 

Use shield doors to line the inner fork to be more realistic looking

 

I was there when you made this.Thanks for interlocking(like I suggeted :squirrel_shiftyeyesBut is the cargo bay all you added?Finally did you fix the wraith glitch?Either way I will edit waht I think when I have tested it.Good work and keep em comin.

 

This should be made with items other than boxes...im sure it took a while but it has no appealing visual aspect......no offense

 

good design and a good standard scale throughout the vehicle, could make a few changes but nice work

 

could use a little more detail 3/5

 

A really simple thing to make an aesthetic map out of

 

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Ok, you should probably at least check the date before you spam, necropost and just bring back a post made almost a year ago. At least use constructive criticism instead of being a jerk. Nobody please post in this again please.