hey guys here is my newest map in progress. i am posting it here because i want to use it in the competition for forged maps. please say anything i need to work on Story: As reach is about to fall, the UNSC discover that there is a base that failed to initiate the Cole Protocol. the covenant have taken the base, consisting of an outpost in a canyon that controls the shield door, 2 massive gates, and a large control room, containing the data leading to earth. a squad of spartans have been dropped on the beach, and need to take that data core back. Phase 1: the spartans star on the beach of forge world, and on the top of the nearby canyon. they get 2 warthogs, one gauss and one chaingun. the weapon cave has DMRs, assault rifles, 1 rocket (anti-air) and 1 sniper rifle. they are also equipped with 3 mongooses. their objective is to get across the canyon and bring down the shields in the outpost. in there way are elites, starting on two sides of the canyon, a sniper roost, and inside the canyon. for the initial spawns, there are 2 shade turrets on top of the cliffs, 2 focus rifles, a banshee, and 2 plasma launchers. inside the canyon, there are multiple barricades and plasma turrets. there are teleporters to and from the cliffs to the main base. the left cliff in the canyon is mined, and the caves are blocked with rocks. Phase Two: In case the spartans downed the shields, the elites had rigged their teleporters to explode, so the humans didn't capture their tech. the barricades also self-destruct. moving through the caves, they get to the shallow crossings only to find a gate in their way and a 1-way shield door on the other side. But that's why they brought a bomb. at this phase, the access to the cliff top weapons are cut off, and a soft kill zpne is place there. the teleporters and outer barricades dissapear with the shield door in the cave. the added weapons are, 1 splaser, an extra sniper and rocket launcher, 1 scorpion, and a rocket hog for the spartans. the elites aren't left out. they get 2 wraiths ( to compensate for the scorpion) 2 banshees and a revanent. they also get the HUMAN turrets on the gate (it is a comandeered base) and plasma launchers and focus rifles. Phase 3, the gates are down, the shield is disabled, it's time to finish it.its the epic finish to the epic battle. the spartans need to take the data core to the awaiting dropship, and the elites wont let it go unless the spartans rip it out of their cold dead hands. 2 scorpions 4 wraiths 2 banshees 4 falcons 1 ghost 1 revenant and a -blam!- lot of weapons. if the elites win, they find earth and destroy humanity. but if the spartans stop them. well then earth is safe, for now. Added after 21 Hours 43 minutes: Hey guys. I might not have made this clear but don't just vote. please write a reply so that I know what about the map is unfair. i would aprreciate it thanks. Added after 1: i just want to say i would love it if you could tell me What is unfair about my game, not just vote