there we go. much better than v1. u seem good at forging and have good ideas. keep on the good forging and maps. btw, i wonder; whats inside the walls in pic 2? if theres nothing, try making it a platform or something.
Hmm, yes, it is a bit early for a V2... I can see that you added more stuff to the map, but i just find the lots of the stuff forged on the map are a bit uneven. There could also be a bit more cover at the center part in the center.
But then again, it IS a Spartan laser we're talking about. After all, there's a ghost and a mongoose for each base which can become a huge nuisance for the opposing team. There is also enough weapons for your teammate(s) to cover you. The snipers enough already, too. After V3 which is due sometime this week, I'll start working on my last 2 foundry maps before Sandbox comes for me. And trust me, they will be a lot better.
In the future please edit the original thread instead of making a new one. This will help to keep the forums clean and tidy as there is no need for multiple threads for the same map.