SOTW Snowmobile

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Laxer, May 19, 2009.

  1. Laxer

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    Yeah, I did a snowmobile

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    Anything I can fix?
     
  2. Glasgow

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    Maybe if you could bring the effect on the left more to the right of the guy, but that's just me.

    Good work.
     
  3. aMoeba

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    Make a border.

    The lines on the right keep attracting my eye.

    Effects on the left are too much.

    BG is unblending; too white.
     
  4. Y35 <3

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    I feel like the snowmobile is not going in the same direction as the swishes in the background.
    If you were driving (snowmobile) and going in a straight line, would there be more uplift on the right then left?
     
  5. Laxer

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    I'm pretty sure that it is turning to the right so that it would be giving off a "spraying" effect on the snow. But yeah, I see your point.
     

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