SOTW entry

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  1. Kidbomber

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    Version 2:

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    Cnc please :)
     
    #1 Kidbomber, Sep 26, 2009
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  2. Knight Kninja

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    first thing i see is the text is in front of the baton's sparks but behind him? put the effects in front of him. next, the clipping masks on the right look kinda odd.. i like the sig though.. maybe add glow to his eyes
     
  3. Kidbomber

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    Alright and those are smudges actually not clipping masks. Ill try to make a Version 2 before i go to homecoming.

    Alright so after looking at it i didnt like it much so I redid the lighting and coloring and this is the new version:

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  4. Knight Kninja

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    yup, i like what you did there better
     
  5. Donii

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    blender the focal more, and create more depth. theres 2 IMO.
     

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