Sonnet 6-8

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  1. Kidbomber

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    Sonnet 6

    By Justin Flood

    How Can i convey myself with other,
    when they hear it they think im insane;
    Twisted love some might say , but im still your lover,
    I'll always be your wedded reign;
    Great passion till death and beyond,
    watching eyes and heavily protected;
    Electrical voltage charged till klieg-on,
    Shock through me, like a tower thats been erected.

    Why do others want to say "Your not sane",
    Oh i hope it doesn't rain.




    Sonnet 7 "**** XY"

    By Justin Flood

    The sight and thoughts of another XY,
    makes muscles rave with anger and jealousy;
    If they think they can steal you away to other guys,
    then there dead wrong, because murder is free;
    Stab him with rusty knives and make him suffer,
    laugh when his blood turns feral and black;
    They live there lives a whole lot rougher,
    just like a dying Sewer Rat.

    She MINE and ill kill you if you take or hurt her here,
    I swear to you that ill always protect you dear.





    Sonnet 8

    By Justin Flood

    True love shows that life is true,
    non-true love is fake;
    Amber and I always knew,
    we had true love even to the date;
    hearts beat on a quicken pace,
    Sparks fly when kisses don't miss;
    Minds think just like if we're in a race,
    True love isn't a risk, but its fake love that makes or break with a risk.

    Time might be my enemy in this great fate at nine o' nine,
    just know that you will always be mine.

    *Knight Kninja fav <3*
     
  2. Knight Kninja

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    as i said, my fav is the last one.. OOH you made it shiny for me! lol.

    anyways, once again, beautiful wording, it inspired me to begin the sonnet i was assigned for class (which, btw, i like writing, but prefer iambic pentameter, though without a set syllable scheme)

    ive always liked your poems about love simply because they mean so much to you. they are full of meaning. i also like the second one as well lol, its kinda funny how scary it is.. but true
     

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