Sonnet 4 & 5

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  1. Kidbomber

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    Sonnet 4 "Vampirism Love"

    - Justin Flood

    Im a stalker of the night,
    I used to travel for others love;
    however I burn in the Holy Light,
    of such; I fly like a winged dove.
    My Sadness arises to sadden other,
    My bite makes you enjoy and alive;
    You chose to stay and become Lovers,
    I'll never think to ever leave your side.

    I have a bite to make you immortal and mine,
    bite you on the neck, and we'll live together till the end of time.

    (Btw Twilight is a bad movie and we all know everyone hates it <3)



    Sonnet 5

    - Justin Flood

    May I ask you a question hun?
    It's So important it has my heart in a knot;
    Are you burning from the big red sun?
    I think not, its just that your so damn hot.
    You make my heart swell, just like the ocean currents,
    You make my heart skip a beat, when you start acomin';
    You always see that ill be there, just like important torrents,
    You even make me lose it all, but thats what iv been wanting.

    My love, My dear, My special Little Girl, even my beautiful wife,
    I just know your my Heart and Soul, That with you I have my new Life.
     
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  2. Whisper

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    Vampires suck.
    Otherwise, good.
     
  3. Kidbomber

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    Twilight sucks.
    Otherwise, <3
     
  4. Knight Kninja

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    haha i like the first one better, but the second one's theme better..

    once again your words astound me, your writing style is amazing
     

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