Songbird

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  1. DC

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    Was just sitting around listening to music, got inspired to make this from this songs thumbnail :
    awesome song, and group if you like sublime or the dirty heads, you should check these guys out

    So I put the text as the name of the song. I don't really like the text, and when I planned to do this, I planned to do something completely different, but misclicked and it looked good so I went with it.

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    I couldn't decide on border color, black didn't look to great so I slapped white on it.
     
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  2. Monolith

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    Not too shabby. A little simple but there's some nice flow there with the direction of the lines. I would change the font of the text or blur the edges a little bit. It sticks out quite a bit just because it's so sharp.. Otherwise, maybe you could've added shadows to the paper? Shadows aren't too difficult imo so it wouldn't take that long. I don't mind the white border, maybe you could thin it out, but it's not that big of a deal imo. Nice work, keep it up!
     

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