Sig made for a friend

The arrows look are very pixelated. And the flow seems to be going in two opposite directions.

 

The arrows would look better if you move them to the left a bit and move the render of the spartan to the right, maybe have a few of them behind him. Try doing that.

 

The reason I like it is because it feels like there's two flows converging.

 

I think it looks like to parallel lines, his shoulder and the arrows.

 

Much better, but I don't really like the look of the arrows in the bottom left. Could you make a version without those?

 

There's no border on the right side in V2, you cropped it out.