Serenity - Race Track

Discussion in 'Reach Race Maps' started by QsxReCoiLz, Nov 7, 2010.

  1. QsxReCoiLz

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    Hello! Welcome to my first ever race track
    SERENITY!

    This is my first thread on here, and my first attempt at something big so please go easy :)

    The map is full of jumps, twists and smooth turns and finishes with style each lap!

    Average Lap Time: 2:15
    Fastest Lap Time: 1:52

    A reasonably lengthed track, not too short, not too long and boring? :)


    PLEASE Leave some feedback! Would be greatly appreciated.

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    Lap Complete!

    Credit:

    Qs x IReCoiLz (Me - Main Forger)
    SHOCK FISK FTW (Co Forger)
    Tomtay95 (Tester)

     
    #1 QsxReCoiLz, Nov 7, 2010
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  2. xDeMiiC

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    Plzz read

    when i click on your map download link it takes me to one of your screenshots????
     
  3. QsxReCoiLz

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    Apologies, I have now fixed it :)
     
  4. xDeMiiC

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    ok THIS MAP LOOKS REALLY GOOOD
     
  5. QsxReCoiLz

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    Thanks :) Please leave feedback if you would, after you have played it.

    +What do you think of the logo?
     
  6. Arctic Hunter

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    this is a nice race map, i mean a nice nice race map i like how you put so many factors into the map. although the name has NO comparison to the map you might want to change it. only my opinion because I think the name should reflect on the map. A question has occurred that I wanted to know if you know what Serenity means? I will also DL for a test to see if this maps is as good as you say.
     
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  7. QsxReCoiLz

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    Serenity is peace/calm but I love the word, and it was the title of a film I loved so... yeah :)

    I know it doesn't really relate but what would? Jump Master 3000? xD
     
  8. QsxReCoiLz

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    Please play and leave feedback? :) Thanks for the compliment though <3
     
  9. lncendios

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    I hate teleporters on race maps, they feel disorienting and lazy. However the rest of the map is great. I really like the traffic light and mega lift. This is one of the few racemaps that will stay on my harddrive.
     
  10. QsxReCoiLz

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    Thanks for the feedback :)

    I wasn't sure how to continue from that point and I wanted a change of area so I though it was the best thing to use, I know it isn't perfect but.

    Glad to know its there to stay :D
     
  11. Natetendo83

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    Map looks cool and has some fun parts. Only things keeping me from holding onto it are the jumps need to be a bit too precise. Also the part with the stunt ramps is easy to fall and have to backtrack a lot. And then the jump at the end is frustrating, even though it's cool I literally went straight up and then back down like 5 times before it finally worked.

    Great ideas, but a few things keep it from being playable in my book.
     
  12. QsxReCoiLz

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    Strange, never had a problem with the end part. Sometimes going too fast makes you flip on first ramp but that was the only thing that went wrong when I tested.

    Thanks for feedback though :)
     
  13. Natetendo83

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    Not a problem. Honestly there is a TON of potential in that map and I enjoyed easily 90% of my time with it. Quite honestly you used some great ideas and have some very unique features so I wouldn't stop forging race maps.
     
  14. QsxReCoiLz

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    Thanks alot :) I may do another race track sometime. This wasn't great but it was my first real try at forge ever, besides a couple simple remakes. :)
     
  15. AnxSaxon

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    Wow awesome map :) Lots of twists and turns, cool jumps, and end is so epic!

    Teleporter is a lil dodgy, but besides that, LOVE IT!

    :)
     

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