Self-Portrait finished. Colored Pencils on Newsprint. 16"x20" DA LINK: Self-Portrait Final by ~The-Whispy on deviantART
<3 Your making alot of nice pieces mate, and they make me want to get better in my drawings aswell One thing I do like alot is the details in the background, that really make the piece look with depth.
That's pretty darn good! Proportion is always hard to nail with human faces, as demonstrated with your jaw/chin. Keep making these, I'd like to see your progress. BTW, those ears are creepy. =]
I'd say the eyes are the weakpoint, and it has a big effect on the overall piece, because it's the one feature that people extract most of a persons expression from. They seem a bit misproportionate, and are slanting downwards, giving a dosile expression. I also think you need some more dramatic darkness just above the eyes, because under normal room lighting conditions, your eyebrows will bulge outward and cast a shadow at the top of your eyes. I'd also say you need the same level of darkness at the top of the neck. These two changes would add a great deal of depth.
I think your chin makes you look really fat in this picture. Just alittle too wide. But besides that the rest is spectacular