Self-Portraint [Fin]

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  1. Whisper

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    <3

    Your making alot of nice pieces mate, and they make me want to get better in my drawings aswell :D

    One thing I do like alot is the details in the background, that really make the piece look with depth.
     
  3. Jimbodawg

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    That's pretty darn good!

    Proportion is always hard to nail with human faces, as demonstrated with your jaw/chin.
    Keep making these, I'd like to see your progress.

    BTW, those ears are creepy. =]
     
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    Yeah, **** the ears. They were hard as hell for some reason :p
     
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    Comparing it to the .gif you have in your signature, I think the chin looks a bit chunky.
     
  6. Whisper

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    It is. I can't go back and fix it though. However, it's not too much more chunky; just a little bit.
     
  7. Matty

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    I'd say the eyes are the weakpoint, and it has a big effect on the overall piece, because it's the one feature that people extract most of a persons expression from. They seem a bit misproportionate, and are slanting downwards, giving a dosile expression. I also think you need some more dramatic darkness just above the eyes, because under normal room lighting conditions, your eyebrows will bulge outward and cast a shadow at the top of your eyes. I'd also say you need the same level of darkness at the top of the neck. These two changes would add a great deal of depth.
     
  8. cowboypickle23

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    I think your chin makes you look really fat in this picture. Just alittle too wide. But besides that the rest is spectacular
     

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