River

Discussion in 'Reach Competitive Maps' started by TerrorWolfman, Aug 20, 2011.

  1. TerrorWolfman

    TerrorWolfman Forerunner

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    Hello fello forgers, im TerrorWolfman. Ive been forgen for quite awhile now and have been lookn at forgehub almost everyday for the past couple months, yet havent posted anything. i think im a great forger, so now i want to start posting my maps for u to see. My first post is river one of my better maps, but not my best. this one has only the team slayer, my better ones ive made with more gametypes. my best couple were meant for infection but one has real good slayer gameplay as well, this i will post in the future. now for the pics...

    Above view of the map

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    u can jump into the river where there r 4 tunnels 2 on each side leading different directions to get behind the enemy trenches for a counter attack

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    Enemy base and hills that lead to the trenches and the middle of the map

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    small bunker along the river ready to unload on anyone nearby

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    Above view of the middle of the map

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    Well i hope u will like it for team slayer, it is best with more people like 4vs4, 5vs5... 8vs8. can do less but isnt near exciting. This map can get crazy with the 4 wraiths being used. Well this is my first post here so comment and message me what u think. i will post more maps soon. enjoy
     
    #1 TerrorWolfman, Aug 20, 2011
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  2. Haha, this looks amazing to be honest. I really like that "Two-Side" feel of this map. The only suggestion(s) I have for you is to add some more cover to the bases as they look very open. For a version 2, could you fix up the Rock Seastack Walls? They look too repetitive, but this map looks very nice and overall good.

    EDIT: I just looked at the bunkers, they look very detailed and definitely add to the map in a good way. Interpretated conclusion upon picture 4.
     
    #2 Insane_Crysis, Aug 20, 2011
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  3. xdemption

    xdemption ATN
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    I will be honest I do believe that you could make a far better design overall. the Rock wall is a solid idea as well as the river, but because of the map's location it is obvious that the rockwall feels very out of place. To add on to that you also use the same objects in a very repetitive manner, which I might suggest trying to change up your use of the pieces at center. Gameflow feels very out of place for you have spots where I believe that no one would dare step to. As for your weapon placement I would highly recommend that you don't use tanks for a map such as this, try using the smaller vehicles for that kind of combat. I also agree with crysis that the bases look very open, a wraith could pretty much dominate the bases with ease for how open it is. Also, the area under the braces just before the bases seems like a good hiding spot for people to go. Might I recommend that you relocate your design in a different spot on the water, maybe against the cliff or between the canyon.

    With this I hope my advice is useful, don't let my comment get you down and always aim to become better. You seem to show determination, use that to your advantage. GOOD LUCK!
     

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