Resist The Power of Heat

The yellow scan lines are ugh-ly. Over than that it's pretty cool, I guess, however it needs more depth. And the text is too big.

 

The text stands out too much. Make it smaller as well.
Nice smudging and good lighting.

 

I like your lighting and effects but take the whole yellowish double out. It's not workin for this sig. Turn the "of"upright and place it somewhere better.

 

I think v3 is the best. My advise is shrink down the text because it stands out a bit to much.

 

The whole thing doesn't really suggest 'heat'. It's a bit too desaturated and sandy.