Red Crusier

Discussion in 'Reach Aesthetic Maps' started by duckduckgoose, Feb 7, 2011.

  1. duckduckgoose

    duckduckgoose Forerunner
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    This is my first attempt at making a cruiser, specifically i got the idea from the Red vs. Blue episode where sarge calls for reinforcements, and he asks for a cruiser of the highest esteem

    It has an escort of 7 one-man interceptors called the MA7Q SRI. The blues have an escort of their own, 6 blue MA7Q SRI craft, the pictures are all on my file share;

    Red Cruiser quarter is the quarters and engineering
    the bridge is the bridge
    the hanger also contains the armory

    please use forge as i have not put spawn points in the ship, as i wanted people to help me through constructive criticism

    Here is the link to my pictures on the fileshare

    Bungie.net : Stats Sign Up

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    Image of the whole thing w/ escort [IMG][IMG]http://img64.imageshack.us/i/reach13657283full.jpg/[/IMG][/IMG]

    Image of hangar:[IMG]http://img41.imageshack.us/i/reach13657281full.jpg/[/IMG]

    Image of bridge:[IMG]http://img831.imageshack.us/i/reach13657284full.jpg/[/IMG]

    Image of Crew quarters: [IMG]http://img217.imageshack.us/i/reach13657288full.jpg/[/IMG]
     
    #1 duckduckgoose, Feb 7, 2011
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  2. Ociee

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    Hello, and welcome to Forgehub! However, your map is lacking pictures and a lengthy description. If you do not add pictures it will be locked in 24 hours, which is a real shame if you worked hard on it! So get your pics up!

    Here are some general tips by Jex Yoyo for posting on this forum, and Here are how to post pictures by Spawn of Saltine. Fix your map soon!

    All in the best......

    ~ Ociee
     
  3. Reign

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    This map is of the highest esteem, indeed.


    The MA7Q SRIs were creative and awesome.

    The only "flaw" about the map that I saw was that the top of the Cruiser was not aligned perfectly. Holding down the left thumbstick while moving an object could fix that, because it makes objects move slower.

    9/10
     
  4. duckduckgoose

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    Thanks for pointing that out, I honestly missed that completely.
    It is a wonder what fresh eyes can do, well that's what my English teacher says

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    I added spawn points inside the ship, and a heavy cannon which fires golf and soccer balls out of a simple magazine, I also fixed, as best I could, the roof problem
     
    #4 duckduckgoose, Feb 8, 2011
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