Please keep in mind before CnC: 1. Done in 26 Minutes (yes I timed myself) 2. The closest writing utensil to me was a pen, and was too lazy to find a pencil. 3. I never had drawing lessons before 4. I am no Gunnergrunt at this stuff... ...but I want to try to be, so please CnC as harshly as you can so I can improve.
Well, it's not bad, but it's also not great... You should look into attempting to shade. Also, drawing is never a race. Take as much time as you can, it'll turn out better. You should try some other drawings, and not rush yourself/be too lazy to get a pencil.
haha yeah, I normally don't try to draw, I just doodle all over my notes, mostly stick figures with boxed heads and rectangle eyes (they look asian that way). Anyways, I just got into the mood of drawing something to do with reach so i grabbed the closest thing near me and just sketched I guess. I know the shading sucks, I can't shade with pens. I am wayyy better at shading with a pencil. thanks for the tips, maybe next time i'll try harder.
Man that is by far better than anything I can do. Shading isn't the best with pen... I would put that on my head though!
It's not that shading isn't possible or "worse" than shading with pencil/other media, it's that people don't know how to do it effectively. Shading with pen can have a very stunning look compared to pencil.