It isn't your best. You are right about that. What's the render from? If anything. I personally don't like the "Hai Guyz" more or less because this is art... and with art you should take it professionally. But meh about the last part. Other than that it's ok. maybe 3.5/5 or some.
yeah, I kind of gave up on it when I got to the text lol. I didn't know what to put but wanted sub text. The smudging is wayyyyy off and bad. The light source isn't strong enough IMO