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Wow. I love the opening in the first screenshot, and everything's really neat and clean. Dl's

 

^^^ what he said. looks good from the pictures and vid gonna give it a go later.

 

Very nicely forged although lacking colour the grey is overpowering.

 

From your video walkthrough, the map looks very clean. I do have to agree with Mabolsa Ritchie that the gray is overpowering, but that isn't completely your fault. Bungie gave us a very gray pallet to work with, but you could change the items to have at least a few lights on them a different color so that people know where they are on the map. If it is symmetrical, like yours is, it can be confusing when you spawn and think that you're on the other side of the map when you're not.

Also another small thing I noticed is the fact that in the very center you have the rockets up where only someone with a jetpack can get to it (as you demonstrated in the video). I am not much for the jetpack so this could be a little basis (I like using holograms/sprint), but there should be a way to get to the rockets without using it. It gives a little too much advantage to the jetpack user (both a high ground / camping grounds, and a rocket launcher).

Other than those two little things, I would have to say this looks like a solid map. Just one last question, what is the weapon listing? The video and pictures barely give you a hint.

 

Very nice map bud, I like it alot. The size and the aesthetics are pefect! But I have one suggestion, make it so that anyone can get to the rockets, not just someone who has a jetpack

 

I like the symmetrical layout and the aesthetics, may I suggest altering the height of the yellow/green spawn rooms to break up the line of sight down the long 2nd story hallways and to add some different levels.

 

Wow! This map feels almost like a campaign level! This map really appears to flow well and the architecture for most of the rooms is absolutely gorgeous. I also like the height variations between hallways you used in several places as compared to having one big ramp. Besides the jetpacker camping spot, where you should REALLY add some grav lifts or something, this looks like a great map. Sorry I can't DL right now, but none the less I think this map is great!

 

I was having this same problem in my maps as well but I realized that there are two different options for coloring objects. I believe you can select the team color of the object, which only shows up when there is a team of that color, or at the bottom of the same set of options, you can change the object color, which works in regular slayer as well. If this is the problem, it looks like you'll just have to go through all the pieces again, change team color back to neutral, and go down to the other option and change the color there instead. Nice map though.