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Ah very nice. I cant seem to find much wrong here except that maybe you should soft erase part of the C4D that extends to the right to help preserve the focal. Great job. You are really good at this.

 

Wow great job. Nice depth and effects. Same thing Hari suggested erase part of the c4d on the right side, the sharp one that extends into the background.

 

What he said.

 

Nice, but I hate how you smudged part of the c4d. Also, some of the C4D's distract from the flow. So they came out a little too heavy. But great work.

 

No. The part below the part you erased. And actually fade it. Dont erase it.

 

The c4d on the right is really distractingtry to remove it. You'd have a bit more flow.

 

Is it just me, or is everyone giving the same CnC as me?

 

No you're giving the same CnC as me.