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  1. WaxyPumpkin72

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  2. RightSideTheory

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    Written over a year ago; thoughts?

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    I see grammatical mistakes lol.
     
    #12242 RightSideTheory, Jul 12, 2010
  3. Black Theorem

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    you might want to check out some of the clauses and how they are melded together at parts. Overall, good. I didn't like how you described the plasma twice in the sentence, "No one wants to remember the near perfect memories of plasma burning, the perplexing smell of flesh being burned, the sheer horrific destitute of children being broiled and cooked alive by blue, hateful plasma."
     
    #12243 Black Theorem, Jul 12, 2010
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    Raping kids in bathroom stalls... ---^
     
    #12245 Adelyss, Jul 12, 2010
  6. RightSideTheory

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    Like I said, over a year ago lol. Hopefully I've improved.
     
    #12246 RightSideTheory, Jul 12, 2010
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  8. Black Theorem

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    inorite?
     
    #12248 Black Theorem, Jul 12, 2010
  9. RightSideTheory

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    That guy looks like a crack head.


    And he can buy a mic if he wants to be a serious rapper.
     
    #12249 RightSideTheory, Jul 12, 2010
  10. Black Theorem

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    i wont knock his look, but hes good regardless.
     
    #12250 Black Theorem, Jul 12, 2010
  11. Spawn of Saltine

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    Anyone want to test an infection map for the testers guild?
     
    #12251 Spawn of Saltine, Jul 12, 2010
  12. Black Theorem

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    sure.
     
    #12252 Black Theorem, Jul 12, 2010
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  14. Black Theorem

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  15. Black Theorem

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    AY! PEOPLE! Get ON HALO!
     
    #12255 Black Theorem, Jul 12, 2010
  16. Transhuman Plus

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    Halo time.
     
    #12256 Transhuman Plus, Jul 12, 2010
  17. Black Theorem

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    Casper, i see you, get on halo pl0x.
     
    #12257 Black Theorem, Jul 12, 2010
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    what about me?
     
    #12258 Youtuber, Jul 12, 2010
  19. MrCasperTom

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    I didn't see this though.

    Bit late for me :p
     
    #12259 MrCasperTom, Jul 12, 2010
  20. Black Theorem

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    *sigh* You guys are sooooooooo late.
     
    #12260 Black Theorem, Jul 12, 2010
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