The only thing i don't like would be the text, it doesn't announce anything important and is so different that it distracts me from the interesting image behind it. Also, the pipes on the right side look awkward, there is no good reason (I know of) they are do far away from the building.
There are better ways of making an image look old and rugged imo. The black effects on the top and bottom seem like they're on top of the image, not engrossed in the image. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for... like it was mold or w/e on a poster or something. Anyway, the biggest thing I see is the excess graininess... you should erase parts of the graininess imo.. it's distracting. The Perfection text is on top of the image not part of the image... again, not sure if this was what you were going for. The font is really cool and fits in well, but the font color/effects make it stand out a lot, like audience said. Well, my two cents. Edit: do you have the stock??