Perfection (Gift for Amber)

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  1. Kidbomber

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  2. loshon

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    Sharpen, change the lightsource. It looks a bit weird where it is.

    Also, add some effects!
     
  3. Kidbomber

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    1. She would be over-sharpened if i did.
    2. Where i put it is, where the natural light source is.
    3. No.
     
  4. loshon

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    Uh, okay?

    You asked for CnC, I gave my opinion of what would improve the signature.

    My apologies, I think I was misunderstood.

    Anyways, it has pretty good text, I might change the font for "Perfection". It doesn't fit too well.
     
  5. Kidbomber

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    I understand you were giving CnC, sorry if i sounded harsh at all.

    And ill see what other fonts i have.
     
  6. Juggernaut

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    You should try changing the font to something more handwritten or cursive.

    Like this
    Or this
     
  7. loshon

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    Luna bar is a good one, as well.
     
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    #8 Whisper, Aug 14, 2009
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  9. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Awesome work Justin, the meaning in your work really puts a positive and strong vibe out, keep up the work man.
     

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