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  1. Kidbomber

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    Saw people in the Halo spirit, so i though i'd join too :)

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    #1 Kidbomber, Sep 4, 2009
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  2. Miraj

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    showoff.
    I saw no flaws other then the smudge or clouds or whatever it is next to the "T" in "ODST" and under the sniper barrel. That part is messing up flow.
     
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  3. loshon

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    Wow, that is incredible.
     
  4. Krazy Kumquat

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    This is amazing, I think the clouds looks fine with the flow. The colors look great, the effects are well executed, and the flow adds to it's overall appeal. There's not really anything I can see that needs to be changed. I'm sure someone else is gonna say it, so I'll just say it now... Tut please?
     
  5. Kidbomber

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    Ill wipe one up after i get from my school's dance :)

    edit: more comments would be appreciated!
     
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  6. KratosAurion777

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    This sig is really fantastic. I love the canvas size, it fits the focal perfectly. I think the dust clouds to the left of the spartan are great (is that smudged? or brushed? or part of the stock?), though I do agree with Miraj that the clouds on the right, by the "T", could be a bit better. The lighting is very well done, with the perfect levels. Once again, really nice sig, great work!
     
  7. Krazy Kumquat

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    After looking at it again I realize what really catches the eyes is the grain in the clouds. They add a feel that makes it seem really old and adds to the over all feel.
     
  8. Kidbomber

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    Its a texture and it was like that, and looking at it it does look a bit weird but still works imo :) Ill make a tutorial and when doing that ill see if i can make a V2 maybe.
     
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    Heeey!! great smudging, great text, great blending, great lighting! maybe emphasize lighting a bit more..

    and work on depth. try blurring the rock behind
     
  10. Kidbomber

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    Alright Guys thanks for the comments!

    With some advise now i was able to make a new version. I apologies ahead of time for that one cloud under his gun, i really couldn't do to much with it. Again Cnc on the new version would be wonderful.

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  11. Knight Kninja

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    personally, i think it looks great now.. although my eyes keep getting drawn to his shoulder as opposed to face/gun, not sure why
     
  12. loshon

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    Eh, I think that the light source makes it so his visor is no longer the focal. I'm looking at his and the gun's clip. I like it better with the new version, but I'd say make the light source in a different spot or make it less. What font is the ODST in?
     
  13. Kidbomber

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    Helvetica Light font
     

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