ODST Series

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  1. Juggernaut

    Juggernaut Ancient
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    I have here seven signatures with similar styles. I want some CnC. I will post them in order of first made on top and last made towards the bottom. Each has it's own color, it's what I was going for. They all took from maybe an hour to the least at 15 minutes. I can list the times. I just want to know if I'm getting better at this.

    [​IMG] -30 Minutes, Color Yellow

    [​IMG] -45 Minutes, Color Red

    [​IMG] -25 Minutes, Color Green

    [​IMG] -20 Minutes, Color Orange

    ORANGE V2
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    [​IMG] -25 Minutes, Color Purple

    [​IMG] -15 Minutes, Color Blue

    [​IMG] -15 Minutes, Color Black and White

    Alright, if you have a problem with any tell me something you want done or something that needs fixing. Also, don't unless you know how to do good text, don't bother telling me to fix it. I suck at text and I have yet to look at a tutorial explaining the good way and bad ways of text.

    Thanks for the help.
     
  2. Draxfear

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    I personally love the red one, probably cos my favourite colour is red lol. Good job on all of them though.
     
  3. Juggernaut

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    Can you maybe elaborate? Why do you love the red one?
     
  4. Halostar317

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    Do you by any chance have the render for the green one?

    Send it to me if you do.
     
  5. Juggernaut

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    Not a render, its a stock from B.net. I don't use renders. Sorry.

    Also, what is up with the G&A? Did everyone die? I would really enjoy some CnC on my signatures please...
     
  6. The Effected

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    The first and second are great, the rest kinda look like crap. I love the second, it's simple but I like the effect and there is a nice flow. I just like the style on the first one. The rest just plain bore me and don't give any appeal.
     
  7. Juggernaut

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    Ironic you say that because I don't like the first two. So, why don't you like the rest of them? Is it the style or what?
     
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  8. Hari

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    In reality i like all of them. There are some repeating issues though. (i just need an excuse to make a list :D)
    -The text is generally blurry.....it should be crisp and sharp and add to the sig well.
    -Text placement could be alot better such as in the first one where it tears up the focal.

    You have some pretty good stocks though and you have to teach me that ripplish effect you keep using in the background like on the green one.
     
  9. RaBBiiTTT

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    I like the first and the last one.

    First
    - I really like the outline you did with the BR and the ODST, it's very original.

    Last
    - I just like Black and White and the smudging is very good.

    Keep it up man.
     
  10. Juggernaut

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    Mostly smudging stuff for the effect on the green one. As for text, I was trying out some new things... Obviously blurring wasn't a good way to go.

    I'm not really worried about text though, but I know I really have to work on it.
     
  11. Frag Man

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    It's very interesting that these are all High Quality signatures, but I see few depth. Otherwise you're great.

    Sorry if you didn't want a CnC on these.
     
  12. Juggernaut

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    No I do. Uh, how would you go about adding depth to these? I know most of the C4Ds I added were effect C4Ds.
     

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