Objection!

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  1. Aschur

    Aschur Wubba lubba dub dub
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    I finally got around to making an animation like someone suggested a while ago. I tried to do it, but ended up keeping it pretty simple... here it is;

    http://00riser.deviantart.com/art/Objection-321795773

    thoughts?

    EDIT: removed text.
    EDIT2: lowered transparency closer to body on moving arm. (the more I look at it, the more I like how the pointing hand turned out)
    EDIT3: gave arm pivot point at shoulder rather than what I had before.
    EDIT4: changed skin color to more pink, should look slightly more angry.
     
    #1 Aschur, Aug 17, 2012
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  2. Auburn

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    In my opinion, you should remove the flashing "OBJECTION" because it's very annoying. In addition to that, I already get a sense of what the image is trying to portray without the text which is fantastic.
     
  3. Aschur

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    Alright, I removed the text.

    btw, my hair actually looks like that.
     
    #3 Aschur, Aug 17, 2012
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  4. Matty

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    shouldn't the transparency of the arm fade off as it gets closed to the body. You're trying to simulate motion, but the hand is clearly moving a lot more than the shoulder.
     
  5. Aschur

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    So less transparent closer to the body? okay, I will try that.

    EDIT: updated it, I think I did it the way you were saying.
     
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  6. Miraj

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    Make a pivot point for the arm, instead of it dislocating down to his hips.
     
  7. Aschur

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    Alright, easy enough. And makes sense. Done, edited post and the deviation.
     
  8. ♥ Sky

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    That's awesome! You should do something similar with Miku and her leek.

    I think that the skin could be a little more on the pinky red side. He looks a little pale at the moment.
     
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  9. SilentJacket

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    nice, you should still finish that self-portrait though.
     
  10. Aschur

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    Working on both of those right now, working with what I believe to be food poisoning from some wings I had for dinner. I finished the color change and am uploading it now, and the self portrait... that may take a bit longer.
     
    #10 Aschur, Aug 18, 2012
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