Wrote a short 4 stanza poem, figured I'd share it here for some critique. I've been writing a lot recently, hopefully going to publish a novel-length story in the coming future, so criticism is appreciated! All situations that would be grammar mistakes are intentional by the way. Night Life --- the night and it's Beholder were They so young? hours pass, so bipolar. A Lifetime had sprung. the light has been dimmed. A Prey never so entrapped, the priest had her pinned A Package had been wrapped as an ant is to the moon, The Predator reeled Her in joyous ventures - end in gloom a capsule, The Capsule's firing pin A Lifetime had begun A Lifetime newly mapped A Lifetime through sin, A Lifetime due to Him. --- Copyright 2014