ok here is a new sig i made. i know the text isnt good. im going to change that soon just haven't had alot of time to do that. let me know what needs worked on and things i could do to make it better v1 v2
I think it's too cluttered. Make it a bit simpler, because my eyes really get lost looking for the focal.
^ I completely agree^ The C4D's stand out too much. The text is too big and the font choice is horrible. It's almost always not a good idea to smudge your render and add some C4D's that are very sharp such as those. Needs more work. Try searching tutorials on deviantART or something.